Embedded Music Journalism

FistYesterday I was reading interviews with Trent Reznor of Nine Inch Nails and I came across what I think is the most tricky and yet correct and clear sentence by a rockstar in an interview that I have ever seen, containing about four levels of embedded clauses:

"When I look at people that I would like to feel have been a mentor or an inspiring kind of archetype of what I’d love to see my career eventually be mentioned as a footnote for in the same paragraph, it would be, like, Bowie."

And it’s finished with a flourish of "like."

I emailed the linguist Mark Liberman at Language Log about it, and he promptly established "the Trent Reznor Prize for Tricky Embedding, to be awarded intermittently." As a sidenote, Mark also commented that "Reznor seems to be a bit confused about where footnotes go." But then, Trent didn’t get where he is today by properly formatting term papers.

I also read an interview where Trent discusses his participation in Hurricane Katrina benefit concerts this past weekend, and it closes with the understatement of the week:

"I don’t know that we’re the ultimate feel-good, everything-is-going-to-be-OK band. But hey, we’re doing what we can."

I wonder if they played Fistfuck.

Comments

2 responses to “Embedded Music Journalism”

  1. mir Avatar

    okay.. but what’s he really saying there?
    That he would wish to appear as a footnote to Bowie or that he would like Bowie to appear as a footnote to NIN,
    ’cause one I’m – like, yeah okay maybe Bowie was a big influence on Nine Inch Nails and the other, it’s a little harder to see where the influence would be.
    But maybe that’s because I am of the opinion that no-one influenced David Bowie except (maybe) Lou Reed.
    But see like, I know how to use like, in a sentence.

  2. Nathanael Matthias Weiss Avatar

    I’m crossing my fingers that Trent Reznor is a complete liar.. that somewhere inside him he believes his career will amount to more than just a footnote. Why do “great” people have to, like, down-play themselves?

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